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Alex from SpreeKiller

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I edit the brightness, coz it's looks too dark in other PC. I hope you can see the details now


This Alex, :iconnakiringo:'s OC from her comic, SPREE KILLER.
I'm so sorry I can't draw shota!!! (ノд<。)゜。I hope you still like it :heart:

EDIT
Thanks to *nakiringo who put this pic to her Lovely blog ♥ [link] (●・㉨・●)ノ゙ ♥ I'm so happy!!


detailed shot → [link]


゜・。・゜・゜・。・゜・゜・。・゜・゜・。・゜・゜・。・゜・゜・。・゜・

And thanks for :iconajiraiya::iconmovolla: & especially :iconlishtar:with:iconnanjung110: for helping me with their advice, so I can finish this piece QvQ



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Texture : devaleeka stock
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

To start this is a very nice picture but there are some small problems with it, mostly in composition.

First the pose seems a little less energetic than could be. Right now with the pose it suggests being dynamic but could stand to be a little more spread out and natural looking. For instance, the lifted hand looks odd and out of place that close to their body.

Also, with all the black and dark red it's hard to see what's going on with the pose in general. It's generally a good idea to either use a lighter shade of black that's really a dark gray or have white lines in between two separates areas of black.